From:SMS
To: Andy Robertson; Brett Davidson
And the results are now
in...
Actually, for the third section there is
really only one real contender:
P's 222 - 223:
Inside the tunnels, Mira removes her helm and some plates of armour (I wonder if we;'d be surprised it it was a breastplate?) in true 'Maryr' fashion in front of Maansonyagger with the 'Butterfly' flayed body hanging in the background.
P's 222 - 223:
Inside the tunnels, Mira removes her helm and some plates of armour (I wonder if we;'d be surprised it it was a breastplate?) in true 'Maryr' fashion in front of Maansonyagger with the 'Butterfly' flayed body hanging in the background.
Just thought you'd like to
know.
Now, it's beginning the long series of
sketches in between the comic strip...
Input on either of you chaps vision of
both the armour and the Mansonyagger, welcome.
(Yes, I know it's 'beetle-like' and has
an array of probes, arms and sensory devices and, yes, I'm assuming the
'Armour' is somewhere between C16 armour and plated spacesuits with straps,
lens-like eyepieces and a hint of the 'Cyber' about 'em. Further
'impressions' welcome)
And the Watcher?
As Andy says, it's background scenery.
As Andy says, it's background scenery.
Drawing the noumena might take more time
and money than any of us have.
Fun. Fun. Fun.
Best:
Smuzz
Smuzz
To: Andy Robertson; SMS
The "Eater" illustrations are to me a benchmark and this:
shows the bulk one would associate with a suit packed with various
complex systems and gadgets giving a unique, contingent aesthetic. I
like the fact that it suggests a recognisable human form, but certain parts,
such as the helm, make no concessions to anthropomorphism.
Samurai armour. A cliche, perhaps, but at least a beautiful
one.
If you google "negroli" and select "images", you will find fine examples
of baroque parade armour. See the attached image of a shield, for
example. This inspired the gorget (a crescent-shaped neck piece) as much
as Giger's "Li 1" that Pallin wears. However, parade armour is not
fighting armour, and the kit worn out in the Night Land is more
functional.
I was very impressed by the Cylon centurions in the new Battlestar
Galactica. See attachment. They're inspired by Epstein's
The Rock Drill, as were the phantoms in the Final Fantasy film,
FWIW. Now of course you can't fit anything human into that wasp-waisted
shape! However, the broad planes of the centurion's armour are
i.suggestive of what a human would look like if we had exoskeletons, and would
suggest a culture that is both dependent upon technology and determined to
treat it as art. People go out, or Go Out, into the Night Land as
demonstrations and tests of their essential nature, and so there is a certain
ceremonial aspect to their expeditions and it would be logical that aesthetics
would play a part in the design of their armour. There may well be
ornamentation as the individual adventurers carry with them the pride of their
clans, so various family motifs and suchlike would probably be included,
either worked in if the armour was made by an artist, or painted on in the
manner of the art that was applied to aircraft in the First and Second World
Wars.
MANSHONYAGGER
Probably matt black.
What comes to mind immediately, something like a stag beetle crossed with
a wolf spider as drawn by Ian Miller. I like Miller's work, but his
style is a bit stiff and angular considering the fluidity of movement (and
Hannibal Lecter personality) I'd associate with a Manshonyagger. What
intrigues be about stage beetles is that we assume that jaws are part of the
head, but in fact the "upper jaw" of a stag beetle is a protrusion of the
thorax and not part of the head at all. Now, there's no need to be
literal in imitating its form, but I do like the uncanny aspect there.
As stated above, it's not a bulldozer or an M-1 tank or any version of
current technology as popularly represented. In a continuum, it could at
one end resemble a real insect, coconut crab or whatever, and at the other,
some pice of beefed-up NASA probe, mixing features that we try to categorise
as "bug-like" with a casual asymmetry - yes, it has something we'd call a
head, but it's off-centre, and there's this boxy thing and... etc.
However, a NASA probe, while elegant in its own way, would be far too
frail for something that is a dedicated fighting machine, designed to
withstand serious defences...
No huge bug eyes, please. I
imagine a selection of sensory devices, each highly specialised and placed
according to functional requirements/contingencies of
well-it'll-fit-in-here.
The sentinels in the Matrix films?
The Manshonyaggers are all very, very old. Their scars would have
scars, which would have settled down and raised families long ago. They may
have simple, rounded beetle-like carapaces, but in all of the ages that they
have lived/functioned, they would have sustained damage and repaired
themselves many times, creating a dense pattern of marks... and possibly,
being intelligent, they would have ornamented themselves, so they may well
have a kind of baroque texturing as well.
As a precedent, I suggest the new Battlestar Galactica again - the
Galactica itself is zoomorphic, suggesting an alligator in this case,
but I read somewhere that the designers were also thinking of human muscles in
the design, hence the curves. The ribs are supposedly some
sort of energy-dissipation feature, like the spaced or gridded armour now
applied to modern armoured fighting vehicles in Iraq and Afganistan.
I've attached an image of the Big G showing how it looks after it has
sustained cumulative battle damage (also, have a look at how it appears in the
very last scenes of the final episode, "Daybreak", with buckled and warped
plating). Now, as I mentioned, the Manshonyaggers can self-repair, but
they also self-design, so symmetry might not be retained over the ages.
Going back to the stag beetles, there might be some strange distortion
of the body form that coincidentally resembles something else.
On the other hand, just to throw a spanner in the works, and to mix
metaphors, the look of stealth bombers is cool - very simple shapes, smooth,
matt, flowing surfaces, everything that has to be deployed, extruded, is under
oddly serrated hatches and flaps.
Again, treat the preceding as a menu, not a checklist. Personally I
like the Galactica look, with a baroque or samurai twist, but I'll be
happy with a surprise.
Cheers,
From: Andy Robertson
To: Brett Davidson; SMS
** the most beautiful machines human beings make are war
machines. This is comprehensible because war machines, like living
things, are undergoing intense real-world selection and the unfunctional
unbeautiful gets flensed away according to criteria which are absolute and
objective.
The most beautiful war machines approach the grace of a living
thing.
** the most beautiful of an evolving line of machines are the last
ones built before the machine type becomes obsolete under the impact of a
quantum leap of new technology. Battleships like the Scharnhorst
or the New Jersey were built just before big-gun warship was pushed
aside by the aircraft carrier, for example. Contemporary fighting arcraft are
about to be pushed aside by drones, but they have achieved real beauty
too.
** this applies to armour. (Armour is a machine for the purposes of
this discussion). Perhaps the most beautiful ((and therefore most
functional, if the equation I'm drawing is correct) form it took was the
Gothic, which unsurprisingly looks not unlike a Centurion. A little after this
peak it was rendered pointless by gunnery and became ceremonial - and it's at
this time that the parade armour becomes popular. ((Which rather undercuts
Brett's referent to Negroli, because he was working in an era of armour's
decadence, while in the Night Land the armour is still vitally functional and
undergoing cutting-edge evolutionary selection by the forces of the
Land. This is not to say that the point of armour as decorated, or
as an expression of clan and personal status, is wrong, because it isn't, but
there is a difference here which must be appreciated. The Negroli
forms are over-ornate to a nonfunctional degree. But decoration and
badges of status and affiliation were used on armour at all times. They
tended however to be separate from the armour - surcoats, crests,
etc. Well, Brett has actually said all this already, hasn't
he???))
** however we are now at the end of time looking backward to the
past and there are no more leaps in tech. Armour has become
perfected to a level never seen in our history, and looks as graceful as a
living thing. How to draw this? Well, in the absence of any
other option I'd draw on the coolest Gothic suits I could find on the web and
make them a little smoother and at once more organic and more high-tech -
chaos-death-spikybits seem intrinsic to the Gothic forms but are probably
counterindicated in the Night Land.
This last advice is very detailed, probably going beyond useful levels,
because too exact & particular, and I emphasise please,treat it as just my
feelings at this time, definitely not prescriptive
MANSHONYAGGER. The same grace-beauty-deadliness equation
applies.
And a little voice at the back of my head says "fractals."
Fractal forms seem intrinsic to entities that self-repair and self-construct as
opposed to being manufactured. The manshonyagger's scars, repaired,
might bloom into a life-like clustering of units and sub-units much as a tree's
scars put forth branches and the branches twigs.
But there will be a functional tension between this working and tis
exploding into self-repair-cancer (future societies will have a short
instantly-understood word for the cancerous proliferation that results from
control failure in self-healing autonymous systems). OTOH it's the
m. that have the capacity to self-mutate who will have become autonymous
survivors and "players", therefore they will come from the grotesque end of this
spectrum.
In haste, more may follow
-Andy R
I don't want to spoil the broth with more variations and details, but I am intrigued by the implications of the Manshonyagger's self-repair systems. The analogy with a tree is very.... hmm, what's the word? Provocative? Fascinating? They would have a gnarled, twisted appearance, the friction of the ages would have smoothed their rough planes. In addition to simple self-design and self-modification, they would have practiced a form of self-topiary...
The
attached image is of a typical pine, which I could imagine as an old
m'yagger, like a dragon having slept for a millennium underground
emerging once more to survey its domain.
From:Brett Davidson
To: Andy Robertson; SMS
I don't want to spoil the broth with more variations and details, but I am intrigued by the implications of the Manshonyagger's self-repair systems. The analogy with a tree is very.... hmm, what's the word? Provocative? Fascinating? They would have a gnarled, twisted appearance, the friction of the ages would have smoothed their rough planes. In addition to simple self-design and self-modification, they would have practiced a form of self-topiary...
Wikipedia has some images of bristlecone pines that would suggest the resulting look perhaps.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bristlecone_pine
Geekery: Aldiss' Helliconia trilogy has animal-plant creatures called stungebags...
Well, this is interesting. Nice to see it.
ReplyDeleteI have to say, the Manshonjaggers have been one of the more fascinating appropriations that we've made. I certainly don't approve of eugenics, but I've tried to envisage a society that does and has had to cope, long-term, with the consequences of that choice, especially when it's given that authority to an external power... which then developed its own agenda. The Manshonjaggers are intelligent, they're inhuman, but in their way, they love a concept of humanity. How would we deal with such things? That is what I've tried to address. Sometimes they're champions and sometimes they're enemies. That, I hope, will become clearer in my coming stories, including Anima.
I think the blog is ideal for displaying this sort of thing
ReplyDeleteNextup: SMS's early NightSuit drafts